As you can see I've embeded the weather forcast from http://news.bbc.co.uk/weather/ down at the bottom of my blog for weather update, the dates bellow is when we are exactly fliming.
Also taking into consideration on sunday that the clocks go back one hour so it will be darker by around half 5 and as im at school until 3pm and the deadlines it could be a problem, this is why I want the external (outdoors) parts done and dusted by this sunday.
We can see you have spent a lot of time on this Dan- your varity of camera angles is visually interesting.
ReplyDeleteNow you need to:
1. Re-film using a complete plain back drop because the house is too distracting.
2. There needs to be clarity regarding your
'conscience' character- is he good/ bad?? address costumes too. If he is your inner artist make him more cutting edge (look at Empire of the Sun).
3. Job interview scenes need addressing as not realistic.
If you get this right this could be brilliant- frame your shots, eliminate your mise en scene and address your lighting.
MPS/KKS